Just my thoughts on truth and honesty and how they can be bad for societal interactions when not mixed with love.
It is honest for instance to say “I robbed at gun point last night.” But would society reward a person with good things if they were to display this honesty or truth? Better still, should society provide a good reward for such truth? I think not.
I was not criticizing your piece, just giving my thoughts on those interactions. Even if you do not get anything out of it some other reader may find it engaging. Having explained my premise, perhaps you may now find some connection to your piece.